Question

你的生活和健康习惯合理吗?请根据表格内容,以How to keep healthy?为题，写一篇短文, 告诉大家应怎样保持健康。

Things to do	How often
Eat fruits and  vegetables	Four or five times a week
Eat tofu products	Every day
Drink milk and yogurt	Twice a day

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Health is important for everyone. Do you have any healthy hobbies? Here are some advices about how to keep healthy. First, you should eat fruits and vegetables four or five times a week. Second, eat many tofu products. They are good for our health. You can eat them every day. At last, you should drink milk and yogurt twice a day. They are delicious and can help us keep fit

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。文章以“如何保持健康”为题，并给出了一些建议。写作时要看清材料，不要遗漏要点。讲各个要点内容用准确的词和句子表述清楚。在陈述各个要点时，可以适当使用一些序数词来罗列，例如first，second等，使文章结构更清晰。

【亮点分析】作品紧扣中心和材料，要点齐全，表达准确清晰。在陈述要点时用了First第一； Second第二；At last最后，使文章结构更紧凑。文中也用到了很多短语，be important for对……重要；are good for对……有益；help us keep fit帮助我们保持健康。

考点：提纲作文。