Question

17．假设你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼．请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信．

与人交流	课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学交谈
表达善意	主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学
参加活动	积极参加班级活动（如运动会、歌咏比赛等）

参考词汇：小组讨论group work 表达想法 express one's ideas
要求：1．词数：100词左右．
2．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．
Dear Diana，
I just came to a new school．And I can't get on well with my new classmates．What should I do？
Steve
Dear Steve，
I'velearnedaboutyourproblems．Ithink you should be active in group work in class andbe brave enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．I'm sure you ll soon be popularamong friends．
Best wishes，
Diana．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇表格类提纲作文．内容是写一封回信，给朋友提怎样和同学相处好的建议．注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1与人交流：课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学交谈
2表达善意：主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学
3．参加活动：积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）
常用到的重点短语：
be active in 积极参与
try to do sth尽力做某事
get on with sb与…相处
forget to do sth忘记去做某事
take part in参加
such as例如
【高分句型】
1．I think①you should be active in group work in class and be ②brave enough to express your ideas．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为think的宾语，that省略．
②adj/adv+enough+to do sth足够怎么样去做某事
brave enough to express your ideas足够勇敢去表达自己的观点．（enough修饰形容词）
He didn't run fast enough to catch the train．他跑得不够快，没赶上火车（他跑得不够快以至于没赶上火车）．（enough修饰副词 fast）
2．①If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello ②when you meet them．
①if引导的是条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．
②when引导的时间状语从句，意为当…的时候．
3．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．
动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．

解答 Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．【高分句型】Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them【高分句型】（与人交流）Being friendly and helpful is also very important．【高分句型】（表达善意）You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．（参加活动）I'm sure you'll soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana

点评 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信．本题材料主要是一封来信，故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信．在回信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应．根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要为一般现在时态．写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯．
注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多．写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑．