Question

13．请以《家人的爱》为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中须包括以
下要点：
1．当我刚刚睁开双眼时，看到的是爸妈的笑脸；
2．当我刚刚学走路时，听到的是妈妈鼓励的声音．
3．我还记得生病时，是爸爸深夜带我去医院；
4．但是，很多时候，我对他们并不了解．
5．通过十几年的了解，我知道他们也和我一样有很多自己的爱好和烦恼．
6．我在家人的关爱下一天天成长起来．
注意：1．可适当增减内容，使短文意思完整、连贯；
2．书写规范，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名．
Family  Love
When I just opened my eyes，I could see my mom and dad's smilling face．When I just learned to walk，Icould hear mother's encourage voice．I still remember when I was ill，daddy took me to the hospital deep in the night．
But，most of the time，I didn't understand them．Through more than 10 years of understanding，I know that they also have many hobbies and troubles，just like us．
I am growing up day by day with my family love．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容为以"Family  Love"为题叙述来自父母的爱．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从六方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．当我刚刚睁开双眼时，看到的是爸妈的笑脸；
2．当我刚刚学走路时，听到的是妈妈鼓励的声音．
3．我还记得生病时，是爸爸深夜带我去医院；
4．但是，很多时候，我对他们并不了解．
5．通过十几年的了解，我知道他们也和我一样有很多自己的爱好和烦恼．
6．我在家人的关爱下一天天成长起来．
常用到的重点句型和短语：
smilling face笑脸
learn to do sth学着做某事
take sb to sp带某人去某地
most of the time大部分时间
day by day一天天地
参考句子：
I still remember when I was ill，daddy took me to the hospital deep in the night．
本句中含有作为remember的宾语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句的运用．
Through more than 10 years of understanding，I know that they also have many hobbies and troubles，just like us．
本句含有that引导的宾语从句，以及through短语作为状语．

解答 When I just opened my eyes，I could see my mom and dad's smilling face．（爸妈的笑脸）When I just learned to walk，I could hear mother's encourage voice．（妈妈的鼓励）I still remember when I was ill，daddy took me to the hospital deep in the night．（生病时）（高分句型）
   But，most of the time，I didn't understand them．（转折，承接上下文）Through more than 10 years of understanding，I know that they also have many hobbies and troubles，just like us．（了解父母）（高分句型）
   I am growing up day by day with my family love．（家人的爱伴着我的成长）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．