Question

【题目】【2014年湖南省娄底市中考】

请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。

Time	Good habits	Bad habits
In the morning	Get up early	Eat junk food for breakfast
In class	Ask some questions	Quarrel(争吵) with her classmates sometimes
After school	Always exercise	Go home late
In the evening	Help her parents with housework	Watch TV or play computer games for more than an hour

要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、词数不少于60个英语单词。

4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?

Yours

Huang Deshun

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.