Question

4．假如你是王宁，4月15日，你参加了学校组织的水浒城旅游活动．请以"My Day in Shuihu Town"为题，写出当天的经历．（注：你可以参考有关内容提示，也可以适当发挥）
（一）内容提示：
1．充当义务小导游，向外国游客介绍水浒文化；
2．协助水浒城的管理员，制止游客不文明的行为；
3．帮助走失的孩子寻找家人．
（二）词语提示：scenery spot景点；foreign tourists外国游客；introduce Shuihu culture 介绍水浒文化；throw litter here and there乱丢垃圾；a lost child 走失的孩子
（三）词数要求：100词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是记叙一次旅行，应该以一般过去时为主要时态进行写作，其中要点要包括：1．交代好旅行的时间和地点．2．写出当天的经历（做导游，制止游客不文明行为，帮助孩子找家人）3．感受如何或者是有什么收获．可以分成三段来叙述经历，这几个要点要叙述清楚，也可适当发挥．

解答 My Day in Shuihu Town
Today is April 15th．I went to Shuihu Town for an English school trip．
There were so many people in Shuihu Town．Among them were some foreign tourists．I went up to them，said hello and introduced Shuihu culture to them．They were very interested and thanked me．
After that，when we visited some scenery spots．We were sorry to find that some tourists threw litter here and there and drew on the walls．So we helped the managers to stop them．
At noon，we had a quick meal．In the afternoon，before we left，I found a lost boy crying alone，so I took him to the
manager's office．With the help of the manager，the boy found his parents at last．
What a day!We were all very busy and tired the whole day，but we were happy．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．