Question

8．你的朋友Peter即将面临中考，然而他却深感压力巨大，寝食不安，情绪低落，学习效率低下，请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松应考．要点如下：
1学会放松（体育锻炼，听音乐…）
2 健康饮食
3 充足睡眠
4 学会沟通
注意：1 词数80词左右．（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．）
2 可适当发挥，但必须包含以上要点．
Dear Peter，
Don't worry about your study too much．First，you should
                                                     
I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型分析：
高分句型一：
①Listening to music is also a good way ②to relax．听音乐也是一种放松的好方法．
①动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数；
②动词不定式to relx作后置定语修饰a good way，意为：一种放松的好方法
高分句型二：
And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits．我认为拥有健康的饮食习惯是必要的．
此句I think 后为宾语此句；从句运用了固定句式It+be+形容词+to do sth，意为：做某事是…的，it为形式主语，后面的动词不定式为真正的主语．

解答 Dear Peter，
      Don't worry about your study too much．First，you should learn how to relax yourself．I think doing more sports is good for your health．Listening to music is also a good way to relax．【高分句型】【学会放松】And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits．【高分句型】Please remember to have breakfast every morning．It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning．【健康饮食】You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep．It will keep you active during the day．【充足睡眠】Finally I think you should talk with your friends，parents or teachers often．Tell them about your thoughts and feelings．Try to get help from them．【学会沟通】I hope you can stay in good spirits，and study better．
Yours
Li Ming

点评 此题为应用文写作．首先要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意信的格式，并注意与汉语信的不同；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误．这样的文章就是好文章．