Question

4．每年六月的第三个星期天是父亲节，请你以"My father"为题目，写一篇短文．从性格、爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱．
注意：1．短文条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
2．能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；
3．详略得当；
4．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
5．词数80词左右．
参考词汇：感动 move（v．）　　回报 in return（adv．）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope he'll be healthy and happy forever我希望他会永远健康快乐．
hope后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
And I'll ①make greater progress ②in return．
①make progress 取得进步
②in return：作为回报．

解答 One possible version：
My father
My father is a teacher，my most respectful person in the world．He's not very tall，but he is friendly．He's outgoing and energetic．
In his spare time，he likes reading all kinds of books，and keeping doing exercise every day．He leads a healthy life，and he never smokes or drinks．（介绍父亲）
When I was young，I used to fall ill．Every time I was ill in hospital，he looked after me all day and all night without any rest．（令人感动的故事）I was moved deeply by his great love．
Father's Day is coming．I hope he'll be healthy and happy forever【高分句型一】．And I'll make greater progress in return．【高分句型二】（如何回报）

点评 本题是一篇提纲作文，写作内容较为开放，写作时，首先要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．