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假如你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 的游记征文，以My Autumn Outing为题用英语写一篇文章，介绍自己曾经的一次秋游经历。游记应包括以下内容：

秋游的参与者、交通方式、时间和地点；

秋游的活动过程；

你的个人感受。

注意：

文中不得出现你的真实姓名、班级和学校名称；

短文必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

词数：80词左右。

My Autumn Outing

Answer 1

My Autumn Outing

Autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on an outing.

Last Sunday, all the students at our school went to climb Qixia Mountain. We went there by bus because it is very far from our school. It took us about one hour to get there.

When we got off, I was amazed by the beautiful sights! There were red leaves all over the mountain. How beautiful they were! We saw some visitors couldn’t stop taking photos. We took some, too. There are so many maple trees that we enjoyed ourselves in a red world. The best part of the day was a game called “hide-and-seek” we played. It was very interesting!

I had a good time that day. Though a little bit tired, I felt very happy. It is the best outing I have ever had.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要作者讲述曾经的一次秋游经历注意要用到一般过去式。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑 讲述了上个星期我们学校的所有的学生都去爬山了，他们看到山上的红叶特别的漂亮。How beautiful they were! We saw some visitors couldn’t stop taking photos.；It is the best outing I have ever had..这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。