Question

11．英国怀特学校下学期组织学生来你校学习了解中国文化，请你以李明的身份给该校校长Mr．Green写一封邮件，介绍你校的相关活动安排及其理由．
要求：
1．介绍不少于两个有关中国文化的活动及安排理由；
2．词数：80-120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．
参考要点：
1．活动计划（打乒乓、包饺子…）
2．安排理由 （非常流行、带来好运…）
3．…．
Dear Mr．Green，
   I'm glad that you'll come to our school for a visit next term．Now I'll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．
Since Ping-Pong is popular inboth Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．They can learn from each other．What's more，they'll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students willwork togetherto make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings arenot onlya kind of delicious foodbut alsoa symbol of good luck．I think they willenjoy their timehere
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
   Best wishes!
                                                                      Yours，
                                                                     Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一封邮件介绍你校的相关活动安排及其理由．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．活动计划（打乒乓、包饺子…）
2．安排理由 （非常流行、带来好运…）
3．我的看法
常用到的重点短语：
both…and…两者都
what's more 再者
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Since Ping-Pong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．
since表示自从，引导的时间状语从句．
2．①What's more，they'll have a chance②to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．
①what's more 再者
②动词不定式作后置定语，修饰前面的chance．
3．I think they will enjoy their time here．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Mr．Green，
   I'm glad that you'll come to our school for a visit next term． Now I'll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．
   Since Ping-Pong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．【高分句型】They can learn from each other（活动计划--打乒乓及其理由）．What's more，they'll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．【高分句型】All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．（活动计划--包饺子及理由）I think they will enjoy their time here．（我的看法）【高分句型】
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
   Best wishes!
                                                    Yours．

                                                                    Li Ming

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．