Question

今年央视春晚，一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深受感动。假设你是九年级一班的李明，你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父母”英语演讲比赛。

演讲内容包括：1. 讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情;

2. 具体的感恩行动（至少两点）；

3. 表达祝福与愿望。

注意： 1．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；

3．词数100左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents.

Dear dad and mum,you're so selfless that you always keep all good things for me.You're so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever.

Mama, thank you for so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always Jalan you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so naive, and her mother, I will work hard Learning, you will not live up to my expectations! Really very grateful to my mother to take care of. When I was sick, my mother is always in every possible way to take care of me. When I failed the examination, the mother also encouraged me to refuel, not to become disheartened. Really grateful to my mother has done, I know it was my mother I love the performance, really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you people, my mother.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文要求我们写一篇“感恩父母”的演讲，作文中药记录和父母在一起经历的事情。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：so…that“如此……以至于……”；be grateful to“对……表示感激”；would like to do sth“想要做某事”以及一些复合句的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。