Question

书面表达。（10分）

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面信息提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。

健康饮食。2）早睡早起，不熬夜。3）参加运动，强身健体。

Healthy Habits

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know, __________

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Answer 1

Healthy Habits

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habits? First, we must keep a balanced diet. Different foods help us in different ways. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may causes many illnesses. Second, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Finally, we had better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求以Healthy Habits健康习惯为标题写一篇短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括三部分的内容。一是健康饮食。二是早睡早起，不熬夜。三是参加运动，强身健体。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从三方面讲述了怎样养成健康习惯。文章中作者自己添加的句子如Different foods help us in different ways. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may causes many illnesses.Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. 使用到动名词充当主语；We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. 使用到短语 instead of。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

考点：提纲类作文。