Question

【题目】书面表达。

近日，学校英语俱乐部即将举办名为“My favourite star”的英文写作比赛。假设你是郎平的粉丝，请你根据所给内容提示，写一篇词数80左右的英语短文。

内容要点:1.郎平，你的偶像，五十几岁，孩童时就痴迷于打排球;

2.过去在队里担任主力(play the lead role)，参加过很多比赛;

3.因其出色的工作，中国队赢得很多奖;她是中国人的骄傲;

4.严肃认真，总致力于高标准，取得了很多成绩;

5.你认为……(发挥2―3句)。

My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team.

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team. She is

my hero. She is in her fifties. As a child, she was crazy about playing volleyball. She used to

play the lead role in her team. Site took part in many competitions. Because of her excellent

work, the Chinese team has won many awards. We Chinese people are proud of her. She is

serious and always works to high standards. She has got many achievements. I think she

has devoted herself/all her life to sports. I admire her most. We should learn from her and

work hard.

【解析】

这是一篇提纲式的材料作文，要求以“My favourite star”为标题，介绍排球明星郎平，属于人物介绍。人称为第三人称，时态主要有一般现在时和一般过去时，注意主谓一致。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。用到的词组或短语有：in one’s fifties，be crazy about doing sth.，used to do，play the lead role，take part in，be proud of devote oneself to，learn from等。

高分句型一：She ①used to ②play the lead role in her team.她过去曾经在队中担任主力。

①used to do sth过去常常做某事。②play the lead role in 在…里面是主力或扮演主要角色。

高分句型二：I think①she has②devoted herself/all her life to sports.我认为她已经把自己的一生都投入到了体育运动中去了。①I think 后引导宾语从句，引导词that被省略。②devote oneself/all one's life to sth固定短语，后可跟名词，代词或动名词，指“把自己或一生都奉献给……”。