Question

4．一曲《时间都去哪了》唱红了春晚，引起很多人的共鸣，让我们感受到时光飞逝．三年的初中生活即将结束，你与老师和同学之间有很多美好的回忆．请写一件难忘的事．
要求：
1．词数：80词左右．
2．字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰．
3．文章内容可适当发挥
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Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇记叙文，要求考生围绕三年初中生活写一件难忘的事情，应注意以下几个方面：1．文章可按总分总结构去写，第一段介绍难忘的人或事，第二段详细来描述这件难忘的事情，第三段可写自己的感受祝愿等.2．在对现在事情进行描述时应用一般现在时，在回忆难忘的事情时应用一般过去时，在写祝愿等可用一般将来时；3．人称应以第一人称和第三人称为主.4．字数80词左右，表达要准确，语言要流畅．
写作常用短语句型：
come to an end 即将结束
There are so many wonderful memories that I can't forget．有许多美好的回忆，我不能忘记．
I will always remember my friend Tom who is a friendly and kind boy．（定语从句）我将会永远记住我的朋友汤姆，他是一个友好善良的男孩．
as a result 结果
It was Tom who helped me with my schoolwork after school every day．（强调句）是汤姆每天放学后帮助我补习功课．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
cheer sb．up 使某人振作起来
Whenever you are in need，I will always be here for you．不管何时你需要我，我一直会在这里．
What a great friend!多么好的一个朋友！
say goodbye to sb．对某人说再见

解答 Our life in middle school will come to an end soon．There are so many wonderful memories that I can't forget．I will always remmember my friend Tom who is a friendly and kind boy．
Once，my legs was badly hurt when I played football during the sports meeting．As a result，I had to stay in bed for one month at home．However，the mid-term exam was coming，so I was very worried．At that time，it was Tom who helped me with my schoolwork after school every day．He not only explained my questionsvery carefully but also told jokes to cheer me up．Finally，I passed the exam successfully．When I expressed my great thanks to him，Tom just smiled，"Whenever you are in need，I will always be here for you．"What a great friend！
At this every moment I will say goodbye to him，but I will never forget our friendship，I will give him my best wishes．

点评 本文是一篇记叙文，写作话题是关于初中三年生活中一件难忘的事，考生应认真审题，确定写作内容，注意在描述难忘的事情时内容要具体充实，体现主题．其次语句要准确和连贯，多用写作时常用的亮点词汇句型，使文章读起来更加流畅．最后注意人称时态的正确使用，写完仔细检查单词的正确书写、标点等细节问题．