Question

【题目】假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?

What are you going to do on the show?

What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend. ______________________________

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We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。