分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题.谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.不要独自游泳;
2.慎重交友(尤其是网络上);
3.危险时报警;
4.健康饮食;
5.不要拥挤(上下楼梯)
6.我的观点
常用到的重点短语:
make friends交朋友
in danger危险中
call sb for help打电话给某人求助
in time 及时
stay away from 远离
【高分句型】
1.Second,①if we ②are in danger,we must ③call the police for help④in time⑤so that we can ⑥keep ourselves safe.
①if引导的条件状语从句.主句含有情态动词must,从句用一般现在时.
②be in danger处于危险中
③call sb for help打电话给某人求助.
④in time 及时
⑤keep sb+adj保持某人怎样
2.Last,summer is coming,we must remember①②it’s dangerous to swim alone.
①remember后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②it是形式主语,动词不定式是真正主语.
3.①In short,everyone needs to learn ②how to protect ourselves and ③stay away from danger.
①插入语,简言之.
②疑问词+to do sth作为learn的宾语.
③stay away from 远离…
解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how can we protect ourselves?Here are some suggestions.
First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line.(慎重交友)Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.(危险时报警)【高分句型】
Also,we should eat healthily and safely.(健康饮食)Besides,we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.(不要拥挤,上下楼梯)Last,summer is coming,we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.【高分句型】(不要独自游泳)
In short,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.(我的观点)【高分句型】
点评 本文是一篇提纲作文,内容贴近生活,学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力,写一篇关于自我保护的作文,学生有话可说.在写作时要表达清楚,信息完整,语言通顺,语意连贯.充分利用好提示语言,使作文结构完整.同时要注意情态动词的运用让文章更饱满.
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