Question

【题目】

过去	被动听讲；缺乏思考；作业量大；考试频繁（或自拟内容）
现在	自主学习；合作交流；作业适量；活动丰富（或自拟内容）
我的感受： ……（请考生自拟两点内容）

注意：

(1) 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

(2) 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Great changes have taken place in the ways of studying in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Great changes have taken place in the ways of studying in our school.

In the past, we spent much time listening to teachers in class. There was not enough time for us to think by ourselves. And we had to do lots of homework. Many tests made us feel bored about studies.

But now in class, we can learn in our own ways. We often work in groups and share our ideas. Moreover, we don’t need to do much homework. And different kinds of after-school activities make our school life colorful.

I think these changes are so great that they help us relax. We can learn better and more happily now. \

【解析】本文属于材料作文，描述学校学习方法的变化。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如in the past, spend ...in doing/on sth, enough, by oneself, in one’s own way, in groups, moreover, make+adj等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。