Question

请根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文。（80词左右）

过去	现在
1.旧房	1.高楼
2.河水肮脏	2.河水清澈
3.步行、骑自行车上班	3.乘公交车、小汽车上班
4.道路狭窄	4.环形路宽阔
5.居住条件差	5.居住环境舒适

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should value the present life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让介绍我们家乡的变化的文章。本篇文章逐一介绍了所列举的内容，与出题人的意图相符。主要是考查used to do sth .另外，写作时，还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者讲述了过去与现在我们家乡的变化。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable..等。

考点：提纲类作文。