Question

根据提示，以“A Trip to Beijing ”为题写一篇词数80个左右的短文。

时间	2013国庆	地点	北京	人物	我和父母
经历	游览了许多名胜；有来自世界各地的游客；景色如此美丽，我们不停地拍照。 登了长城，我心里感到很自豪（be proud of）。 我们品尝了美味的北京烤鸭。 …………………………
感受	玩了几天我们有点累，但非常兴奋；难忘在北京的日子。

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Answer 1

On October 1st my parents took me to Beijing. We stayed at Huabei Hotel. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old.It’s the longest wall in the world. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We’re very proud of it.

We also went to the Palace Museum. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, North Lake and Xiang Hill. I now know more about the history of China. We took many photos.We ate delicious Beijing Duck.

Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing.We’re tired but excited.I’ll never forget the days in Beijing.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：It’s the longest wall in the world.like climbing the Great Wall. We’re very proud of it.I went back with my parents by train.the trip to Beijing.We’re tired but excited.等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。