Question

人的一生要学会很多技能，你一定还记得你第一次学会某件事的经历，请以“The first time I learned to…” 为题，写一篇英语短文放在你的成长手册中，记录下这次经历的整个过程及带给你的人生感悟。

要求清楚地表达事情的整个过程和感悟，词数70左右，开头已经给出，不计入词数。

The first time I learned to…

In our life, we have to learn many skills. I will never forget the first time I learned to____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The first time I learned to…

In our life, we have to learn many skills. I will never forget the first time I learned to ride a bike. That was a summer afternoon. I told my father I wanted to learn to ride a bike. My father was pleased to be my coach. At first I was a little afraid and fell off the bike again and again. Whenever I wanted to give up, my father would encourage me to try again. Finally I could ride. How excited and proud I was!

From then on, I could ride bike to any place I want to go and from this I know that “Never give up and I will be successful”.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。主要介绍自己第一次学会做某事的经历。要详细描述这次经历的整个过程及带给你的人生感悟。注意描述经历时有过去时态。

【亮点说明】这篇短文能运用正确的时态，详细的描述自己学骑自行车的经历，表达自己的感悟。在短文中运用了较高级的句型。如Whenever I wanted to give up, my father would encourage me to try again.，How excited and proud I was!，I could ride bike to any place I want to go等。这使文章更丰富。

考点：话题作文。