Question

初中三年的时光转眼即逝，时间虽不长，你肯定有了不少的收获。请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你这三年的收获。

1.在这三年里，你在学习方面有哪些收获呢？

2.你是否明白了友谊的重要？你能与同学们能够友好相处吗？

3.你懂得了父母的爱吗？你知道怎样与他们沟通吗？

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

 

Answer 1

How times flies! We have spent three years in the school. I am very sad that I have to say goodbye to you all. Looking back,I've learned much in the past three years. I have learned how to play football. I have made many good new friends in school. But my biggest gain is that I have improved my English a lot. I can get an A in the English exam now. What's more, I can speak with others in English fluently.That makes me very happy.

In these three years,our teachers worked hard and took good care of us. All the students studied very hard and we got on well with each other. I hope we can keep in touch with each other all the time and our friendship will last forever.

I have also learned that it is our parents who love and care about us most. So we should respect them. Not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should do what we can to help them with housework.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要采用一般现在时态，主语是第一人称。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】1、文章层次分明，内容全面。全文共有3个段落，包含了所有提示内容，并有适当发挥；

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: How times flies“时光飞逝”, Looking back“回首往昔”，What's more“甚至”, get on well with“与人相处和睦”，keep in touch“保持联系”，not only …but also…“不仅……而且……”等等；3、一些名词性从句的运用也让文章质量提高一个档次，如：表语从句But my biggest gain is that I have improved my English a lot.“但是我最大的收获是我的英语提高了很多”，定语从句的强调句型I have also learned that it is our parents who love and care about us most.“我也认识到是我们的父母最爱和最关心我们”，还用到了倒装句Not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should do what we can to help them with housework.“我们不仅要努力学好功课，而且还应该力所能及的帮他们做家务”。

考点：提纲作文