Question

4．目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议．80词左右．
一、原因：1．考试太多；  2．自身勤奋不够；  3．把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上；4．为了骗取家长和老师高兴．
二、你的看法与建议．
   At present，a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit----cheating in examinations．There are four main reasons．First，schools have given students too many exams，some of which are too difficult．Second，some
students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons．Third，they waste a lot of time playing games or
surfing the Internet．So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams．Finally，students have to do so to make their
teachers and parents happy．
In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study．We students should be honest and diligent，and only in this way
can we improve our study and make progress．Besides，our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for
ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇议论文，谈谈自己对于学生考试作弊现象的看法．通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第三人称，时态为一般现在时态．动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．
写作思路及要点：本文的要点主要包括：1．造成作弊的原因：（考试太多；自身勤奋不够；把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上；为了骗取家长和老师高兴）
2．你的看法与建议．本题所给材料较为详细，写作中注意把学生作弊的原因表达清楚，并提出自己的建议．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，表达观点时注意使用序数词，连接词，注意宾语从句的应用．
重点句型及短语：
Schools have given students too many exams．学校里的考试太多．
Some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons． 一些学生不努力，学习不刻苦．
They waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet． 他们在玩游戏或网上花费太多的时间．
In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study． 在我看来，考试作弊对我们的学习有很大的伤害．
Our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves．我们的老师应该让我们少考点试，多给我们时间自主学习．
have enough time to do sth．有足够的时间做某事

解答 At present，a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations．＜总起，引出话题＞
There are four main reasons．＜总说，有四种原因＞First，schools have given students too many exams，some of which are too
difficult．Second，some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons．Third，they waste a lot of
time playing games or surfing the Internet．So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams．Finally，students have to
do so to make their teachers and parents happy．＜分开说明，四种原因＞
   In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study．＜表明观点＞We students should be honest and diligent，and
only in this way can we improve our study and make progress．＜学生层面，怎么做＞Besides，our teachers should offer us fewer
exams and more time to study for ourselves．＜给老师的建议＞

点评 本题是一篇提纲作文，是一篇针对目前学生中普遍存在的现象的议论文．在写这篇作文时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来．