Question

4．你在中学已经待了接近四年了．明年你就要毕业了．四年中发生了很多值得你记忆的事情．跟同学相处的喜与乐，与老师相处的点点滴滴．他们对你的学习有什么样的帮助，你在这四年收获了什么？根据提示写一篇短文．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Friendship is①the most important and precious thing ②that I get．
①最高级的使用．
②that I get为定语从句，that是关系词，先行词thing．
【高分句型二】
I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．
so…that如此…以致于，引导结果状语从句．

解答 I get friendship from my class life
My class life is full of happiness．（班级生活如何）During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get．【高分句型一】（点题--最大的收获） I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．（经历）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．【高分句型二】In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．（做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．

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