Question

你叫Lucy,你的笔友Tom想要更好的了解你个人爱好。请你根据下面表格内容,介绍一下你的喜好和原因,至少补充一条。

	Names	Reasons
Group	Westlife	energetic, good singers, look cool ,wear cool clothes
Movie	Spider Man	wonderful, exciting
Book	Romeo and Juliet	moving ,beautiful words
…	…	…

 要求：
1. 用上提纲中的信息,并允许适当发挥;
2. 要求用上至少两个定语从句;
3. 内容充实,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。词数90左右。
Dear Tom,
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Lucy

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my after-class hobbies with you. The music group that I like best is Westlife. I like it because they are good singers. They are really energetic. They wear cool clothes and they look cool. My favorite movie is Spider Man. I think it is wonderful and exciting. I like reading. And my favorite book is Romeo and Juliet, the famous book written by Shakespear. It is moving and it has beautiful words. What’s more, the subject I like best is PE, because I like sports and I can play with my friends in PE class. What about you? Can you tell me about your hobbies. Write to me soon.
Lucy

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，利用图表的形式，介绍了我最喜欢的乐队、电影和书。我们要根据表格中的提示把这些用英语表达出来。并且题目中有要求要至少再补充一条我的爱好，所以写作时要注意。通过审题我们可以知道写这篇短文应用一般现在时；因为介绍的是自己的爱好，所以人称应用第一人称。注意题目中要求要至少用两个定语从句，写作时要注意这一要求。另外写作时要适当使用连词，使上下文意连贯，文章表达流畅、得体。
【亮点说明】这篇短文中使用了较多的句型、短语和从句。例如定语从句的使用，The music group that I like best is、the subject I like best等。其他从句的使用如I like it because…、 I think it is…等。另外短文中还用了一些短语，如written by Shakespear、 What’s more等。文章内容表达流畅，符合题目要求。层次分明，富有条理。