Question

书面表达（15分）

吴莫愁在2012年的中国好声音中以其独特的声音和表演风格一举成名。请根据表格内容，写一篇有关吴莫愁的介绍。

要求：词数不少于80。

姓名	吴莫愁
性别	女
出生日期	1992年4月18日
出生地点	黑龙江齐齐哈尔
爱好	唱歌、跳舞、旅行、滑冰……
经历	●就读于沈阳音乐学院（Shenyang Conservatory of Music） ●2012年参加《中国好声音》
梦想	●像杨坤一样举行32场音乐会。. ●和爱唱歌的朋友一起唱歌。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Wu Mochou is a popular woman singer who comes from Qiqihaer, Helongjiang Province. She was born on April 18th, 1992. She has many hobbies. She likes singing, dancing, traveling, skating and so on. But she likes singing best. In 2012, she took part in the Voice of China. She became famous for her special voice and performance style. Now she is studying in Shenyang Conservatory of Music. She has two dreams. One is to have 32 concerts like Yang Kun. The other is to sing with friends who likes singing.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要要求介绍歌手吴莫愁。所以在写作时注意根据事情发生的时间确定时态。注意是she要注意动词单三形式和过去式的运用。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如：But she likes singing best. One is to have 32 concerts like Yang Kun. The other is to sing with friends who likes singing. 用了who引导的定语从句增加了短文的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。