Question

8．生活中有许多一瞬间的美好，它们也许会给你留下永远的回忆，你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义．请以"My special_______"为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等，以及你们共同经历的某个美好回忆．
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整，80词左右．
My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I wasso glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．I am glad to have this special friend．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型】
1．I was ①so glad that I could ②not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything ③they said!我是如此的开心，我不仅仅能流利的和同学说英语也能理解他们所说的．
①so…that表示如此…以致于，引导结果状语从句．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分．
③they said定语从句，关系词that作为从句宾语故省略，修饰先行词everything．

2．This is my special friend，①Amy，someone ②who would ③not only have fun with me but also help me ④when I need it．这是我的特别的朋友，不仅仅和我玩的开心在我需要的时候还帮助我
①Amy，作为my special friend同位语．
②定语从句，先行词someone不定代词，故用who作为关系词作主语．
③not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分．
④when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．（她是谁）And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．（我怎么了）Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I was so glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!【高分句型】
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．【高分句型】（为什么特别）I am glad to have this special friend．

点评 初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．