Question

【题目】书面表达

奥黛丽·赫本是一位享誉国际的明星，假设她是你最喜欢的明星，请根据提示要点用英语写一篇短文。

Personal details	Name	Audrey Hepburn
	Date of birth	4 May 1929
	Place of birth	Belgium
	Talents	A great actress, a great beauty and a great humanitarian
Acting career	1．dreamed of becoming a ballet dancer at a very young age
	2．worked as a model before an actress
	3．won many awards, some famous works Gigi(1951): the beginning of her successful career Roman Holiday(1952): a big success, the Oscar for Best Actress for her role Ondine(1954): a Tony Award Wait Until Dark(1967), Breakfast at Tiffany’s(1961), The Nun’s Story(1959), Sabrina(1954): four more Oscar nominations. ...
Charity work	devoted much of her time to..., worked closely with UNCEF..., be presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom...
Your opinion	...is considered as..., I love her because..., ...

注意： 1．短文须包括以上内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，可以适当发挥；

2．100个词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Audrey Hepburn is my favourite star.She was born on May 4th, 1929,in Belgium. She is a great actress, a great beauty and a great humanitarian.She dreamed of becoming a ballet dancer at a very young age.And she worked as a model before an actress.She won many awards and some famous works. The beginning of her successful career is in 1951,in Gigi. She had a big success, the Oscar for Best Actress for her role during Roman Holiday, in 1952.She won a Tony Award in 1954,during Ondine.She attended Wait Until Dark in 1967,Breakfast at Tiffany’s in 1961,The Nun’s Story in 1959.She earned four more Oscar nominations in Sabrina in 1954. She devoted much of her time to charity work.She worked closely with UNCEF.She was presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom.She is considered as my favourite star,I love her because she devoted much of her time to charity work.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己最喜爱的明星。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She devoted much of her time to charity work.She worked closely with UNCEF.She was presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。