Question

2．假设你交了一个叫Tom的笔友，请你介绍一下他的情况，写一篇50词左右的短文．
提示：1）他的国籍及年龄2）他的家庭情况  3）他的理想工作及理由．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There are four people in his family他家里有四个人．
there be有
【高分句型二】
He thinks it's very exciting and interesting他认为很激动人心和有趣．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 I have a pen pal in Canada．His name is Tom，he is 15 years old．（国籍和年龄）Tom is a clever boy，so he can speak three languages．There are four people in his family，【高分句型一】they are his parents，his sister and him．Tom's father is a doctor，he always helps others and he likes his job very much．His mother is a teacher，she teaches math in a middle school and the students all like her．Tom's parents want him to be a teacher，too．But Tom don't like it，he don't like children（家庭情况  ）．He wants to be a policeman．He thinks it's very exciting and interesting【高分句型二】．（理想工作及理由）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．