Question

内容提要：假设你是李磊，根据所给英文关键词的提示，给你的美国朋友Jim 写一封信，信的开头与结尾已给出，介绍你是如何学习英语的。

关键词：favorite subject, work hard, practise reading, speaking,listening, writing, keep on doing, remember words, listen to ... watch English videos, talk in English (写作时，不必局限于所给的关键词，可以根据自己的实际情况适当发挥)。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Jim,

How are you? Today I want to tell you about my English study. I'm interested in English because it's my favorite subject. I'm working hard at it now. You know, I practise listening, speaking, reading and writing everyday. But my spoken English is not so good. So I keep on practicing all the time. I remembered over 1,000 English words. In the evening, I watch English videos. I try to talk in English with my classmates or my English teacher. I still have some problems. I can't make sentences with new words. Would you please give me some help?

Best wishes!

Yours，

Lilei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信作文。题目所给信息简明扼要，要求明确，内容贴近学生学习实际，学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地运用了书信作文的基本格式，文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用句式和短语，如：be interested in、work hard at、practise doing sth、keep on doing 、all the time、try to do、Best wishes!等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：材料作文。