Question

11．2012年5月8日晚，一张高三男生教室内集体半裸苦读照片迅速在微博上爆红．画面中18名男子留着短发，穿着短裤，全部赤膊上阵．更有意思的是，明亮的夜灯，留着白色粉笔字的黑板，看起来崭新的桌椅标着"五中 305"．那些半裸男学生个个集中精力，持笔埋头在书本中…
请根据图片和文字提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己的感受，分析一下他们刻苦学习的理由，再结合自己的实际生活谈谈今后的打算．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to get good grades，I have to stay up late and get up early．
句中使用短语有："in order to do sth 为了做某事"、"stay up 熬夜"、"get up 起床"．这句话意为：为了取得好成绩，我不得不熬夜很晚、起来很早．
高分句型二：
The harder I work，the better I will become．
句中为比较级的特殊用法"the+比较级，the+比较级"，意为"越…，越…"．这句话意为：我越努力，我会变得越好．

解答 Look at this picture，there are eighteen shirtless students in the classroom．They are writing carefully．How hard they study!（叙述图片内容）
Now the students are bearing a heavy learning load．Their parents always ask them to go to a famous school．They are under increasing pressure．So they  have to try their best to work hard to get better grades．（分析学生的状态）
When I saw this picture，I felt a little sad．I am just like the students in this picture．In order to get good grades，I have to stay up late and get up early．【高分句型二】However，it is necessary to do so．No pains，no gains．The harder I work，the better I will become．【高分句型二】So I will try my best．（我的感想）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．