Question

【题目】书面表达

Tony是我的笔友，他来自澳大利亚，现居住上海。今年14岁。他喜欢中国食物和熊猫，音乐和足球是他的最爱。他喜欢和别人交谈，并且喜欢交朋友，他想在中国当一名记者。今天是周六，天气晴朗，他正在和朋友们在公园玩。

请根据以上的信息，写一篇以My pen pal 为题不少于60字左右的短文（关键词已给出）

Australia, Shanghai, music, soccer, Chinese food, pandas, reporter, sunny, playing, park

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a pen pal. His name is Tony. He is 14 years old. He is from Australia. Now he lives in Shanghai. He studies in No.12 Middle School. He likes Chinese food and pandas. He thinks that pandas are very cute.

Music and soccer are his favorites. He also likes talking with others and making friends. He wants to be a reporter in China.

On weekends he often likes to play soccer with his friends. Today it is Saturday. It’s sunny. He is playing soccer with his friends in the park.

【解析】

试题分析：短文介绍了笔友Tony的情况，所以句子的主语用第三人称单数，所以句子的时态用一般现在时，要注意上下句的衔接，所写的句子应该符合英语语法。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be from来自；like doing喜欢做某事；make friends交朋友；want to do sth想要做某事；play soccer with sb和某人一起踢足球。用了that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。