Question

根据中文提示，以“My home town”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，第5点用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥，词数不少于70词。

提示要点:

1. 我的家乡在江苏的南部，是个美丽的城市；

2. 过去是一座小城市，但现在已发展成为一座现代化的大城市；

3. 以前曾经有许多污染，这是个非常严重的问题；              

4. 现在有许多人已经认识到了这个问题，积极采取措施减少污染。

5. 我们应当……

My home town

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

                                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My home town

My home town is in the south of Jiangsu. It is a very beautiful city. It used to be a small city. But now, it has developed into a big modern city. In the past, there has been a lot of pollution. This is a very serious problem. Now, many people have realized the problem and they have taken active action to reduce the pollution. We should plant more trees and make the city more beautiful.

【解析】注意时态，人称本题应该用现在完成时，要将题目例举的要点列举出来，注意固定词组搭配。