Question

假设你是Kate Brown，想寻求笔友。请根据下面的表格，发送一封介绍你自己的电子邮件。60词左右。

Name	Kate Brown
First Name	Kate
Last Name	Brown
Age	14
School	Guanghua Middle School
Phone Number	63626239
From	Canada
Language	English
Members of family	Father ,mother, grandpa, grandma, brother, sister,cousins and their names.

电子邮件的开头已经给出：

Dear friend,

My name is Kate Brown.______ _ ___

_______________________________

_______________________________

_______________________________

_______________________________

_______________________________

 

Answer 1

Dear friend, 

    My name is Kate Brown. I'm 14 years old and I'm from Canada. I have a round face, big blue eyes and

long hair. I speak English. I play football after school. It's my favourite sport. I like biology class at school.

It's fun. My favourite film is Danger Zone. Do you know it? The movie is very exciting. Please write to me

soon and tell me about you. 

                                                                                                                                              Yours,

                                                                                                                                               Kate

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信，给出一定的汉语提示。给考生发挥的余地 较大。对于考生的综合能力较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在自己能力范围内，选择句式要赋予变化，这样才能证明你能更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个整体。最后要注意使用高级词汇与高级句型使文章显得更有档次。因为是书信，故时态用一般现在时较好，注意人称的转换并且注意时态的转换

【亮点说明】本文出现一些常见短语如play football 踢足球after school 课下write to 给某人写信。It's my favourite sport这是很不错的句子，提到高级词汇favourite.。 Please write to me soon and tell me about you.这个句子出现两个并且的祈使句，使文章显得很利落。

考点：提纲类作文。