Question

【题目】 书面表达 （满分10分）

当2015年4月25日（星期六）下午两点左右尼泊尔（Nepal）大地震发生时，你和家人正在干什么？假如让你去灾区当志愿者，你愿意干些什么？

请你写一篇80 词左右的短文。

提示词：灾区 disaster area 地震 earthquake

Answer 1

【答案】

At 2 o’clock,on the afternoon of April 25th ,2015,an earth happened in Nepal.When the earth happened,we were sleeping.It's reported that more than 8,000 people died in the Nepal earthquake. What's more, millions of people there have become homeless. And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. To help people in Nepal, I raised money and gave it to charity. I also gave away books and clothes, because I think although this earthquake made a lot of children homeless, they can’t give up studying. So the book I sent can help them continue learning knowledge. Now, I’m going to do more things for Nepal people. I want to write some letters to Nepal students and tell them how brave they are to encourage them keep being alive. I believe no Valentine's love of natural disasters. In a battle to save the lives of all people, the victory will come after a disaster test of the Chinese nation.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文是命题作文，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如I want to write some letters to Nepal students and tell them how brave they

are to encourage them keep being alive. I believe no Valentine's love of natural disasters. In a battle to save the lives of all people, the victory will come after a disaster test of the Chinese nation.

等等。