Question

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，按要求写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实姓名。

假如你是李磊，你的笔友Tom想来北京旅游，请你给他提一些建议。如：时间、活动安排等，并给出原因。

提示词语：the best time, warm, do some sightseeing

Dear Tom,

I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing. __________________________________

Yours,

Li Lei

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom

I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing. Here is some advice for you.

I think the best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold. Why not do some sightseeing such as visiting Bei Hai Park and the Summer Palace? They are famous. And you’d better take a camera because you may want to take some photos.

There are lots of people visiting Beijing in spring, so it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming. The most comfortable way to travel in Beijing is by taxi, but it is the most expensive one.

I hope my advice will be helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据汉语和英语提示写一篇书信给笔友Tom提建议来北京旅游的时间和安排。文中必须用到提示词the best time, warm, do some sightseeing以第一人称的形式来写，注意书信的称呼和结束语，要把时间和安排交代清，注意一些固定搭配和词组，考查了学生的综合能力。

【亮点说明】这篇文章构思新颖，内容包括面很全，语言组织力很强，切中题意，文中出现了一些好的句型如：I’m happy to know that，he best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold.，you’d better take a camera ， it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming. 使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。