Question

【题目】作文。

学校的英语报就“争做校园环保小卫士”话题征文，请你投稿。

谈谈生活中你的具体做法、环境保护的重大意义以及你的环保倡议。

要求：1. 词数80--100词；

2. 短文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等信息；

3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

提示词语： collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference

Good environment is important for everyone.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.

As students, I think it’s our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And it’s also a good idea to take part in recycling programs.

I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：作文要围绕要点展开写作：具体做法，感受，建议。要符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性.注意提示语 collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference的运用。注意作文的升华，提出环保的意义。

写作亮点：To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.1.具体做法最好写上三点，三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用 first，second，third。这篇文章处理的很好，to help with it, Besides, and。2. 注意从句的运用，比如时间状语从句，定语从句等。