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4．学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动．假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动．内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
提示词：Li Hua，student，Class Four，Grade Three，the Old People's Home，sing，dance．
My name is LiHua，I am a student in ClassFour，GradeThree．Can I go to the Old People's Home to be a volunteer？I like helping old people because they need more help than others．Besides，I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright．When I see they are happy，I feel happy，too．I think that being a volunteer is great．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I like helping old people because they need more help than others．我喜欢帮助老人，因为他们比别人需要更多的帮助．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
 高分句型二
 I think that being a volunteer is great我认为做志愿者是伟大的．这是一个宾语从句，I  think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句，being a volunteer 是动名词做主语．

解答 My name is LiHua，I am a student in Class Four，Grade Three【要点一，自己的简要介绍】．Can I go to the  Old People's Home to be a volunteer？【要点二，要去哪个地方做志愿者】I like helping old people because they need more help than others【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．Besides，I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright【要点三，能做什么事情】．When I see they are happy，I feel happy，too．I think that being a volunteer is great【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点四，对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会】

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