Question

【题目】 疫情（outbreak）期间，同学们在家里经历了不寻常的假期。请根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Special Holiday”为题，写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What did you do during the day?

（2）How did you feel?

（3）What are you going to do after the outbreak?

要求：（1）短文须包括提示的所有要点，可以适当发挥；

（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

（3）词数80左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：temperature, online classes, housework, exercise, hobby

My Special Holiday

During the outbreak, we were asked to stay at home.

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

My Special Holiday

During the outbreak, we were asked to stay at home. We can't go out and do exercise at park. In the outbreak, my mother studied different kinds of food for me in the internet every day. I became mom's tasting officer. The meals are so delicious that I gain ten pounds. We can't go to school because of the outbreak, so we have classes online every day and take our temperature every day. I feel bored because I can't be with my friends in class every day. But we must also stay at home and listen to the community workers.

I want to go shopping and eat out with my friends after the outbreak. And I want to go to school to see my classmates.

【解析】

提干阅读提干，这是一篇叙述性文章，叙述疫情期间在家的假期生活。例文分为三部分，第一部分是疫情期间在做什么，第二部分是你的感受，心情，第三部分是疫情以后想要去做什么。这类文章一般以一般现在时为主。

例文这是一篇极优秀的例文，很好的完成了题目所给的任务，例文符合英语语言语境。文章描述的是疫情在家的情况，每个任务点之间连接紧密，文章连贯。文章中在家做的事之间联系紧密，第二段是疫情以后自己想要做的事。同时文章也有一些亮点词句，增强前后逻辑关系，增加上下意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

亮点词句：

短语：stay at home待在家里；every day 每天；take our temperature量体温；go shopping购物；eat out外面吃饭；

句型：（1）We can't go to school because of the outbreak, so we have classes online every day and take our temperature every day.因为疫情我们不能去学校，所以我们每天网上上课，并且要每天量体温。because of 因为；every day每天；take our temperature量体温；（2）I feel bored because I can't be with my friends in class every day. 我感到无聊因为不能每天和朋友们在教室上课。feel bored感到无聊；