Question

3．进入九年级后你在生活和学习方面遇到了哪些困难？你是如何处理这些问题的？你今后准备怎么办？
请根据以下要求及表格提示写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈这些方面．
具体要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2．短文必须包括以下要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．开头已给，不记入词数．

问题	过去	有很多空闲的时间 作业很少 …
	现在	很忙 不被允许做… …
解决方法	向…请求帮助 通过…学习
计划	打算…

提示词：used to，free time，not be allowed to，ask…for help
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine．I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．And I had little homework to do．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．They can give me some useful advice．In the future，I think I should plan my time properly．I must balance the study and my hobbies．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是进入九年级后你在生活和学习方面遇到了哪些困难？你是如何处理这些问题的？你今后准备怎么办？时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．问题；1）过去：有很多空闲的时间，作业很少2）现在：很忙，不被允许做…
2． 解决方法；向…请求帮助；通过…学习
3．计划
常用到的重点短语：
uesd to do sth过去常常
in order to 为了…
be allowed to do sth 被允许做某事
turn to 转向
learn to do sth 学会做某事
【高分句型】
1．I had time to do things①that I liked to do，②such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．
①that是关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词things，thay作为从句的宾语．
②such as 例如，and so on  等等
2．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．
which作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词books，介词from是与learn构成learn from…从…学到，将介词from提到关系词which前面，which 作为宾语．此时which不能换成that．
3．Now I am ①so busy that I rarely have time to do other things ②except doing homework．
①so…that，如此…以至于．that引导的结果状语从句．
②except 介词，除…之外

解答 My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine． I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．【高分句型】And I had little homework to do．（有很多空闲的时间，作业很少）So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．【高分句型】But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．【高分句型】In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．（很忙，不被允许做）
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．（找老师帮忙）They can give me some useful advice．I think I should learn to plan my time properly．（学会计划好时间）In the future，I must balance the study and my hobbies．（计划）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．材料中已经明确了写作的要点，写作时要仔细审题，不能遗漏要点．另外，句子的表达要清晰准确，句子间的逻辑要清楚．这篇作文中会涉及到不同的时间，所以一定要注意时态，谓语动词的变化．整篇文章要做到结构清晰，要点明确，表达通顺流畅．本文中使用了很多好的短语和复杂的句式．