Question

今年三月五日，是雷锋牺牲五十一周年纪念日，也是毛泽东题词号召全国人民“向雷锋同志学习”的第五十个年头。请你给泰州日报写一篇报道，介绍你们学校开展学雷锋活动的情况，内容如下：

雷锋简介	1940年12月18日出生于贫苦家庭，22岁为了救战友而献出了年轻的生命； 热爱祖国，工作勤奋，严于律己，关心他人，乐于助人……
活动内容	1.上网查找有关雷锋的故事、学唱雷锋歌曲、看雷锋电影…… 2.做好事(举例，两至三句话)。
感想打算	……(至少一句话)

要求：

1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。

（参考词汇：战友 comrade，做好事 do good deeds）

Learning from Lei Feng

Lei Feng

 

 

 

 

In order to remember Lei Feng, our school organized all kinds of activities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Lei Feng was born in Changsha in 1940, a city in South China. He was from a very poor peasant’s family. When he was a little boy, his parents, sister and brother were all dead,so he became an orphan. Only after his hometown was liberated in 1949,did he have a chance to go to school. He studied and worked very hard, so he became a League member in 1959.

Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan "learn from Leifeng, our decent idol", so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict。

　　To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them

Lei Feng spirit will always be alive in our heats.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要把雷锋的精神传遍社会，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文用一般过去式时态来介绍雷锋的简介，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: s Everyone should copy his sprit每个人都要学习他的这种精神， Lei Feng spirit will always be alive in our heats.雷锋的精神永远活在我们心中。文中表达了对雷锋同志的敬仰，使用连词使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。