Question

9．假如你所在的城市正在创建"国家级卫生城市"，作为该城市的一员，你会有许多感触和想法．下面请你以"How to set up a national healthy city？"为题，根据所给提示写一篇80-100个单词的英语短文．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
  要求：至少写出包含所给提示，意思连贯，语法正确的5以上句子．短文内容可以自由发挥．
  提示：throw rubbish  扔垃圾；talk loudly  高声喧哗；smoke 抽烟
Spit  吐痰； in public  在公共场合； give seats to the old and children 给老人和小孩让座； be polite to other 对他人有礼貌； obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则；  form good life habits  养成良好的生活习惯； turn off the lights 关灯
How to set up a national healthy city？
Our city is trying to set up a national city．As a member of the city，I think…
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I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children当我们在公共汽车上时，我们应该给老人和孩子让座．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it！我相信我们的城市会变得越来越美丽和清洁，只要我们尽全力为它做些什么！I'm sure后面是一个宾语从句，时态用的是一般将来时，as long as 只要．

解答 How to set up a national healthy city？
Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city．As a member of the city，I think we should obey the rules【开篇点明主题】．We shouldn't throw rubbish here and there．We arc not supposed to talk loudly in public，such as in the library or in the museum．We can't spit or smoke in public either．When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】，especially some women with babies in their arms．During our daily lives，we should be polite to others．And we should obey the traffic rules．Remember to stop when the traffic light is red．We mustn't go across the road until the traffic light is green．Finally，wc also should turn off the lights before we leave the room．【正文部分，如何创建"国家级卫生城市"的建议】
I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it！【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】【结尾部分紧扣主题】．

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑
关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．