| Dear Tom, My classmates,Lucy,bought a new pen.I liked it very much,so I used it without her permission.Unluckily,I broke it.Then I put it back secretly.Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me.I don't know what to do.Can you help me? Yours, Daming |
分析 【高分句型一】
①when you broke the pen,you didn't tell her the truth ②instead of putting it back secretly当你弄坏了笔,你没有说真话而是偷偷的放回去.
when引导的时间状语从句.
instead of代替,而不是.
【高分句型二】
Then I think you should say sorry to her as soon as you can我认为你应该尽快的说抱歉.
think后是省略that的宾语从句.
解答 Dear Daming,
I know your problem.Don't worry so much,I will give you my advice.(明确要求)You've made two mistakes.First,you used your classmate's pen without her permission.Second,when you broke the pen,you didn't tell her the truth instead of putting it back secretly.【高分句型一】If you tell her the truth,perhaps she'll be angry with you,but at least you'll prove you are honest.(指出问题)
Then I think you should say sorry to her as soon as you can.【高分句型二】You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her.She will realize that you're truly sorry.(提出建议)
I hope the advice can help you.I'm sure you will make up with her soon.(表达祝愿)
Yours,
Tom
点评 写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
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