Question

假如你是林莉，你的美国笔友汤姆给你发了一封电子邮件，他想了解中国父母跟孩子的关系和美国有什么不同。请根据提示内容给他回一封邮件。

提示：

1.中国父母不习惯对孩子说“我爱你”等亲昵话，而美国父母则经常用言语表达对孩子的爱。

2.中国孩子对父母不能直呼名字，而在美国这是可以接受的事情。

3中国父母习惯照顾孩子到很大，而美国父母大多鼓励孩子独立做事。

要求：

1.邮件包含所有的提示信息；2.意思连贯，语句通顺；3.词数要求：80---100词。（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 提示词：acceptable.接受的；independently.独立地

Dear Tom,

I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Lin Li

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.American parents often express their love to their children with the words in daily life, while the Chinese parents are not used to speak so directly, such as the word" I love you'’ to their children. And also the Chinese children can not call the name of the parents, compared with in USA, this is acceptable. Chinese parents often take care the children until they graduate from the high school or the university, But in USA, most of the parents just encourage the children to be confident and work independently.

Yours，

Lin Li

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给提示写一封电子邮件。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提纲作文。