Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

请以My school life为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My school life is very interesting. We begin our classes at 8 o'clock and we have seven classes every day. We have many subjects. They're math, Chinese, English, biology, P.E. and so on. After school, we often borrow books in our school library. We have outdoor activities on the playground like football, basketball and so on. Look! Some girls are singing happily under the tree, and some boys are playing football over there. I like my school life very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给话题作文，介绍我的学校生。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We begin our classes…, They're…, We have…以及I like…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己对学校生活的喜爱。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了学校生活是有趣的，接下来介绍在学校学习的科目和所进行的活动，最后表达自己喜欢学校生活。此处every day, after school, on the playground, under the tree, over there等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。