Question

1．写一则自己的梦想，与大家一起分享．词数60-80
写作思路：
1．What is your dream？
2．Why do you have this dream？
3．How will you realize your dream？
写作要求：
1．注意书写的格式，有开头与结尾．
2．表述清楚，无语法错误．
3．书写规范，无大小军和拼写错误．
4．字数在要求的范围之内．
I want to have my own school one day because I like students very much．I think my students will like me，too．（介绍我的梦想）
In my school，I won't ask my students to do more homework．I will ask them to learn through practicing．I will let themlearn in a pleasant way．I would like them toknow how to learn and how to live．If they have problems，I will try my best to help them．【高分句型一】（憧憬未来我的学校）
To realize my dream，I will study harder than before and learn more from my teacher．What's more，I will learn how to get on well with the children．I think my dream will come true one day．【高分句型二】（怎么实现梦想）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
If they have problems，I will try my best to help them．
句中"If they have problems"为条件状语从句，句中短语有"try one's best to do sth 尽某人最大努力做某事"．这句话意为：如果他们有困难，我会尽我最大努力来帮助他们．
高分句型二：
I think my dream will come true one day．
句中"my dream will come true one day"为宾语从句，句中"come true"意为"实现"．这句话意为：我认为有一天我的梦想会实现的．

解答 I want to have my own school one day because I like students very much．I think my students will like me，too．（介绍我的梦想）
In my school，I won't ask my students to do more homework．I will ask them to learn through practicing．I will let them learn in a pleasant way．I would like them to know how to learn and how to live．If they have problems，I will try my best to help them．【高分句型一】（憧憬未来我的学校）
To realize my dream，I will study harder than before and learn more from my teacher．What's more，I will learn how to get on well with the children．I think my dream will come true one day．【高分句型二】（怎么实现梦想）

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