Question

【题目】书面表达

泰山是我国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大量的游客来此游玩。请你根据下表中游客以前和现在行为的变化，以“Behave well during the travel”为题，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你的感受。

以前	现在
乱扔杂物，随地吐痰	废物入箱，爱惜环境
摘花毁树，伤害动物	爱护植物，关爱动物
随处抽烟，乱涂乱画	自觉禁烟，保护名胜
你的感受：作为中学生，我们……（至少3点）

注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;

2.词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;

4.参考词汇:行为、举止：behave;吐痰：spit

Behave well during the travel

Mountain Tai is a famous tourist attraction . Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago,________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Behave well during the travel

Mountain Tai is a famous tourist attraction. Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago, a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often during the travel. Some threw litters, painted on the walls, and spit on the ground everywhere. Some picked flowers, destroyed trees and hurt animals. And even worse, some smoked in the woods. How dangerous!

Luckily, things have changed now. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendly to animals. Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept. All these changes make us happy.

As a student, I think we should know it’s our duty to protect the environment. In order to make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful, let’s behave well and try our best to help fight (against) bad behaviors…

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。在写作前首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

再次根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：该文语句流畅，准确表达了题目中的每个要点。还多次使用了连接词and，固定短语如a few，a lot of，quite often，In order to，try one’s best等等都为文章增色不少。