Question

 今年的4月22日是第46个世界地球日，节约资源，减少碳排放量，保护我们的地球是当前最重要的事。请写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议你的同学从小事做起，加入低碳生活一族。要求包括以下要点：

1. 节约用水、用电、用纸；

2. 去超巿购物自备购物袋；

3. 不要购买不必要的东西；

4. 不要购买一次性餐具；

5. 步行或骑自行车上学。要求：1.语句通顺，内容表述完整；

2. 首句已给出，不计人总词数；

3. 可适当发挥。

提示词：the amount of (............. 的数量).one-off(一次性的）

题型分析：此次写作是以第一人称，使用一般现在时来倡议同学们过一种低碳环保的生活以保护我们的环境。

行文思路：根据所给提示，为了节约资源、减少碳排放、保护我们的地球，"我" 可以倡议同学们从题目中要求的几件小事做起：减少我们日常生活中水、电、纸的使用(reduce the amount of water ...);自备购物袋(take our own bags );不买不必要的东西(not buy fewer things that are unnecessary );不购买、不使用一次性餐具(buy or use one-off cups ...);步行上学(walk to school);最后发出号召（Let，s...).

高分点拨：此次写作行文过程中注意句子之间的衔接，不可逐句翻译，可适当发挥。在提出建议时可以使用had better，should，shouldn't等情态动词。行文中定语从句的使用可以增加得分亮点。

佳作展示：

With global warming getting worse, more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life
in order to reduce greenhouse gases.      

Answer 1

 With global warming getting worse,more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life in order to reduce greenhouse gases.

  We'd better reduce the amount of water,paper and electricity we use. It's important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave the room. We should take our own bags when we go shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarkets. We'd better not buy things that are unnecessary. We shouldn't buy or use one-off cups,chopsticks or bowls. It's good for us to walk or ride bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees to make our environment more beautiful.

  Let's take action and live a low-carbon life.