Question

看图，以My Room为题,写一篇10句话的短文。
My Room

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Answer 1

This is my room. It is very nice. There are two pictures on the wall. Under them, there is a bed. And my bag is on the bed. Next to the bed is a desk. My computer and books are on the desk. There is a chair under the desk. There is a bookshelf next to the desk. There are many books in the bookshelf. There is also a sofa in the room. I often sit in the sofa to read books.

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。图片上是一个房间的布置。房间里东西比较多，写作时可按照一定的空间顺序来写。注意主谓一致，尤其是系动词be的用法，以及表示方位介词的正确使用。
【亮点分析】这篇作文按照一定的空间顺序，将房间里的物品摆设描述清楚。文章用到了there be句型，系动词be的用法很准确，并且用到了很多方位介词，如on在上面, under在下面, next to在旁边, in在里面， 等等。