Question

20．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．   
根据你是林林，你的表弟明明即将开始九年级忙碌的学习生活，为帮助他轻松愉快地度过这一年，请用英语给他发一个e-mail，内容包括以下几个方面：
1．生活方面（饮食、睡眠、运动等）
2．学习方面（在学校、在家里）
3．你对他的美好祝愿
Dear Mingming，
     I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．
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                                                                               Yours，
                                                                               Linlin．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
高分句型：
①You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy．你最好每天早上早起锻炼身体以保持健康．had better do sth最好做某事，后面跟动词原形；do some exercise 做锻炼．
②It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things．吃干净和健康的食物是非常重要的，不要吃任何脏东西．句子中It is important for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事是重要的，这里it作形式主语，to引导的不定式短语作真正的主语．

解答 Dear Mingming，
I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．（引出话题）
First of all，you should have a good rest after a day's study and sleep on time．You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy（高分句型）．It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things（高分句型）．（生活方面需要注意的事情）Secondly，you should listen to your teachers carefully in class and finish your homework by yourself when you go home．Don't be lazy and you will be a good student．（学习方面需要注意的问题）Finally，I hope you will have a good time during your study and when you have some questions，I can help you．（美好祝愿）

                                  Yours，
                                      Linlin

点评 本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．