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16．近几年，网上就"是否应该保持长假"的问题讨论得如火如荼，英语课上，你班也就此话题提出如下正反两方的观点，请你根据表格中信息进行阐述，并谈谈你的看法．

The long holiday should be canceled	We need a 7-day holiday
●许多公共场所太拥挤 ●易引发交通事故 ●污染环境	●好好休息 ●家人团聚 ●去旅游
你的观点：…

注意：1．短文必须包括表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写； 3．词数80-100个．
It seems that everyone is talking about whether we should have the 7-day holiday these days．                

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They think①②if they have a long holiday，they can have a good rest after long time of working．他们认为如果有长假，可以在长时间的工作后好好的休息．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词，从句用一般现在时．
【高分句型二】
Last，they can go travelling to places they like．
they like作为定语从句，修饰前面的places，关系词which作为宾语，故省略．

解答 It seems that everyone is talking about whether we should have the 7-day holiday these days．Some people think that many places are too crowded during the holiday，especially the shops，the supermarkets and the places of interest．（许多公共场所太拥挤）And there are too many cars on the highway and it will cause a lot of traffic accidents．（易引发交通事故）What's worse，it is bad for our environment，because too many cars will cause air pollution and if people throw rubbish，they will pollute the environment．（污染环境）
However，other people don't agree．They think if they have a long holiday，they can have a good rest after long time of working．【高分句型一】（好好休息）Besides，family can get together．（家人团聚）Last，they can go travelling to places they like．【高分句型二】（去旅游）
I think it is good to have a 7-day holiday．We can stay with our family，read some books or go to movies．If we want to travel，we can ride bikes to the nearby places．That's a better way than travelling by car．（我的观点）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍是否恢复七天长假进行了正反方的讨论，并给出自己的观点．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Some people think that…，it is bad for…，it is good to…，及They think…等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己选择适合自己的运动的理由．
本文结构紧凑，语言简练．开头介绍了反对恢复七天长假的理由，接下来支持恢复七天长假的原因，最后指出自己的观点．此处用了talking about，the places of interest．get together．stay with 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少．