Question

书面表达（共1小题；满分15分）
Tom从网上获悉第二届青奥会将于2014年在南京举行，他给你发邮件想了解一些南京的情况。请你用英语给Tom回一封邮件，简要介绍南京的概况。内容包括：
1、中国东部，江苏省会；
2、历史悠久，名胜众多；
3、三十年里变化很大，高楼林立，出行方便；
4、成功举办全运会（10th National Games of China, in 2005）；
5、市民友好热情，开放的现代化城市。
6.、为了迎接青奥会，作为中学生的我们，做了……（至少一条）
要求：
1. 词数80左右（不包括已经给出的句子）；
2. 条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；
Dear Tom,
You know that the second Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing in 2014. But you haven’t ever been to Nanjing. I will tell you something.
                                       
                                       
                                       
                                       
Best wishes!
Yours, Wang Hai

Answer 1

【范文】Dear Tom,
You know that the second Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing in 2014. But you haven’t ever been to Nanjing. I will tell you something.
Nanjing lies in the east of China. It is the capital of Jiangsu Province. Nanjing is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest around here. There have been a lot of changes during the past 30 years. Many tall building have been built all over the city. It is easy to travel in the city and it is fast to go to other cities in China. In 2005, Nanjing successfully hosted the 10th National Games of China. People in Nanjing are quite kind and friendly. Nanjing has become an open and modern city. At school, we have made some posters to let more students know more about the Youth Olympic Games. I hope you will visit Nanjing soon.
Best wishes!
Yours, Wang Hai

解析试题分析：本书面表达是有一封电子邮件，应注意格式；本文是结束南京的基本情况，应该根据提示内容加以阐述，应注意描述的顺序。书写时，注意时态及人称的运用。其中会用到一些固定短语或固定用法，如 the capital of，with a long history， places of interest， all over 等。
考点：本题考查提纲作文。
点评：本题给出提示，这就减少了一定的难度。在书写书信时，应该注意格式，时态，人称和固定词组搭配，注意连词的运用。还要注意句子的顺畅，应符合英语的表达习惯。